2008 Travel Writing Scholarship - the winner!
WORLDWIDE | Monday, 2 June 2008 | Views [8036] | Comments [5]
It's been an adventurous week for our judges who have enjoyed reading the Scholarship submissions. We received over 200 entries from all corners of the globe and the standard was exceptionally high.
And the winner is.....
Of course there must be one winner - and our very worthy recipient of the 2008 World Nomads Travel Writing Scholarship is Susannah Palk!
Congratulations Susannah!
Keith Austin, travel writer from our judging panel had the following to say about Susannah's story;
Susannah’s story of finding the beating heart of Havana by taking the trail less touristed struck me both for its simplicity and for her ability to paint a world in a few words. As she wanders away from the brightly coloured facades to find the buildings “held together by dirt and depravation” where men fix old Ladas and the police turn a blind eye to the streetside entrepreneurs I found myself wanting to jump on the next flight to Cuba. I, too, wanted to taste the cigars, the rum and the salsa of the Malecon at midnight. And that, surely, is the basic aim of a travel story – to bring new places to life and perhaps persuade the more sedate among us to get out there and taste what life has to offer.
Susannah also impressed because her story structure is sound, her emphasis is on the reader and not herself, and her grammar and spelling are correct. These last two are important but hideously overlooked attributes in any travel story; travel editors get inundated with stories every day and simply cannot read every word of every submission. By misspelling names or misplacing apostrophes you are giving them the excuse they need to throw your masterpiece in the bin.
Read Susannah's story
Our runners up....
The competition was tight, and we strongly congratulate our runners up, as they were all exceptional. Keith Austin has made the following comments;
First runners up: Lynette Willoughby
Lynette’s story from the Kimberley had great characters, a good ear for dialogue and life-threatening action. What more can you want from a travel story? Her description of Stumpy the one-legged donkey shooter brought him to wonderful life. I wanted to read more about her 4WD campervan trip. Lynette has a good future in travel journalism if she keeps up these standards - and I should note that very little separated her and the eventual winner. (Read Lynette's story)
Second runners up: Mark Bailey
Mark took a different approach in that he looked at the slowly burgeoning tourism business in Papua New Guinea through a local tour guide who has been trying to teach his countrymen to embrace tourism and protect their environment at the same time. It’s a nice profile of a country seen through a man who has, to our eyes, nothing but who really has everything he needs to be happy. (Read Mark's story)
Third runners up: Emily Sim
Possibly not the favourite tourist destination du jour but Emily’s tale of living and travelling in Uganda, and of confronting death, landmines and the need to pee during a crowded bus ride was a terrific read. It was simple and unhurried, and she manages to convey a lot about her experience and her feelings in a few well-chosen words. Her description of a piece of old asphalt road as “a fossil from a faraway time” said so much in so little. (Read Emily's story)
Read the winning stories about 'An Unforgettable Adventure'
Winner: Susannah Palk
An old man is sitting quietly on the steps, looking me up and down as I
reach for my guidebook.
At the sight of my book, he is suddenly spurred into action. ‘One
peso…one peso for photo, with me, famous Cuban’ he says.
‘Err, no thanks, I’m okay’ I reply.
As he becomes more animated, I have a momentary sense of deja vu. His
face, his beady eyes, grizzly beard and communist beret are strangely
familiar.
I close my guidebook and then I realise, this old man on the steps is
the same guy gracing the cover of my guidebook!
‘Ah’, says the ageing poster, now smiling, ‘two peso, I sign book’… I
must be in tourist territory!
I’m on one of the main roads in Havana Veija, Havana’s old historical
centre, a patchwork of brightly-coloured colonial facades set amongst
impressive cathedrals, castillos and town squares.
There is an almost theme park quality to the place and it’s crammed
with tourists. Everything you’ve ever associated with Cuba you can get
here; rum, cigars, mojitos, salsa, vintage cars, even revolutionary
leaders -Che Guevara t-shirts anyone?
But of course, this is a sanitized Havana, minus the poverty, dirt and
grime. Stray, ever so slightly, off the prescribed tourist path and
what you’ll find is a completely different city. As I venture down a
back street, metres away from the tourist clad Museo de la Revolution
in downtown Centro Havana, I enter a different world. No brightly
coloured facades around here, just crumbling buildings held together by
dirt and depravation.
Layers of washing hang from lines strung out of windows. Women gossip
across balconies as children play baseball in the street below. A man
lies beneath his car, a little Russian Lada, wrestling with a
mechanical problem. A cyclist zooms past, a double bass strapped to his
back.
One man has set up a barbershop on the street outside his house. Down
the road another resident is also open for business - a table and chair
- repairing watches and shoes.
A police car cruises past, its occupants turning a blind eye to these
small and illegal outposts of entrepreneurial businesses. I get an odd
look from the police.
‘You American?’ a middle-aged man in a baseball cap asks me as I turn
to look back down the street. ‘No, no’, I hastily reply. ‘Ah’, he
smiles, ‘good, we not like Americans here’. He flashes me a cheeky
grin. ‘Hungry?’ he asks as he leads me to a house a few doors down. I
am a little apprehensive but pleasantly surprised to find a miniature
restaurant set up in the back courtyard, illegal of course.
Going local, I order the Cuban staple of pork with salty rice and a
stew of black beans. The food is served by the matron of the house,
Marie-Louise, who obviously thinks I am eating for three burley men.
After polishing off my meal, well a good quarter of it, I take a stroll
along the Malecon, Havana’s famous boardwalk where the city meets the
sea.
Deserted during the day, life slowly seeps back along the Malecon as
families, friends and lovers emerge to stroll the strip and watch the
sun set behind the sea.
As it gets darker more and more people gather to meet and drink in the
cool breeze. Young girls in short skirts and big hoop earrings, flirt
and giggle with boys swigging drinks and swaying their hips to the
music.
A few entrepreneurial types walk from group to group, selling peso
pizzas as couples canoodle, positioning themselves away from prying
eyes. By midnight this five-kilometre stretch of concrete is a sea of
people and music. The Malecon, I’ve discovered, has the lot, cigars,
rum, sea and salsa. The only thing missing is the tourists.
First runners up: Lynette Willoughby
Five days into our trip adrenalin levels were high, fresh supplies were
low, and hot showers an all too distant memory.
As our 4WD campervan rattled along a red, dusty, corrugated track we
dodged curious Brahman bulls, kangaroos and other animal life that
choose to call this wild, north-western pocket of Australia ‘home’.
Welcome to the Kimberley. The turn-off to ‘Drysdale River Station
Homestead’ was an invitation that could not be refused. This million
acre property offered camping sites with showers ! And the dining house
offered Brahman burgers (what sweet revenge). We sat on carved red gum
stools relishing beer on tap. Cold beer. And then we met Stumpy.
Stumpy didn’t mess with words. Two short sentences later we knew that
Stumpy used to shoot ‘roos further up north. A confrontation with a
salt-water crocodile whilst fishing in his ‘tinnie’ resulted in Stumpy
losing half his left leg. Now he was hired to accompany bush pilots in
helicopters (“choppers”) and shoot feral donkeys for the station
owners. “We sus out the females and ping ‘em with a tracking device” he
explained. “Come breeding season the males swarm around the female like
maggots to a lump of meat. Then we get ‘em all in one go. Piece of
piss”. Stumpy took another long draw on his cigarette, hitched his
holster belt further up and lovingly caressed the handle of his rifle.
His piercing black eyes reminded me of the wedge tail eagle we saw
yesterday.
“What’s the fishing like around here Stumpy”? Stumpy carefully ground
the butt into the red dirt and surveyed us again with those eagle eyes.
Seemed like he was working out whether we could be trusted with
confidential information. “Good barra on the Drysdale landing about 5
k’s up”. He paused again. “Gotta watch out for salties. If you see a
moving ‘V’ formation in the water; get the hell out of there”. Then as
an afterthought “We don’t like losing our visitors”.
We took Stumpy at his word. The barra were biting, and so were the
mosquitoes. Nature called and I left my mates and walked further along
the bank. I barely noticed the roughly strewn mound of sticks and dirt.
Then I heard a noise. I spun around and saw a salt water crocodile
snaking its way through the mud towards me. My life flashed before me.
Most of what happened next is a horrible blur, but the terror of the
moment will stay with me forever. Afterwards Stumpy explained in his
usual laconic fashion. “You were dead lucky it missed you at the first
lunge. Uses up their adrenalin; they’re knackered if they don’t get you
first time round. Forgot to warn you about the females nesting. Here,
I’ll shout you a beer.”
Second runners up: Mark Bailey
In some countries Kay Nupore could be a wealthy man. He runs his own
tour guide business, he is the founder of a wildlife conservation
centre, he has been nominated to run for ward councillor in the
regional elections, and he has recently been interviewed by the
national airline’s in-flight magazine. This, however, is Papua New
Guinea; and, like most of the other 5.7million people living here, he
lives on only a few dollars a day, his home is made from dried grass
and wood, and he has no electricity or running water. But he has few
complaints.
“You know, not many whitemen come here. But when they do, I find them –
like you!” Smiling mischievously he was referring to how he had
accosted me in the supermarket while I was comparing lettuces. Given
Kay’s appearance: a diminutive, dark-skinned man with reddened teeth in
his late 30s, sporting an unkempt beard and cheap clothing, he bears
little resemblence to a tour guide.
But in an area only discovered by outsiders 60 years ago Kay’s
experience is invaluable; he has been conducting treks and village
stays in PNG’s remote and beautiful highland interior for over twenty
years. In such inaccessable terrain it seems like each valley has its
own dialect – nationwide there are reported to be 867 languages – and
he not only speaks all the local languages but also seems to know
somebody in every village.
But for Kay, his most rewarding tour is the fruits of his own work. “I
try to teach them not to destroy our land; they can make money from the
forest.” he explains, recounting how he convinced his village of the
benefits tourism could bring; eventually persuading them to constuct a
cage-less wildlife refuge, showcasing local creatures like tree
kangaroos and birds of paradise in their natural habitat. Since then,
on the land originally set aside for his deceased son, he has built a
traditional hut to serve as a guest house for more adventurous
travellers.
He realised tourists come to PNG to see unspoilt scenery, traditional
culture and amazing wildlife. And his own village has it all: a small
row of round-based wooden huts with conical thatched roofs, set against
a backdrop of verdant forest that rises up steeply to contrast against
a deep blue sky; warm indigenous villagers; and a first-hand insight
into the Papua New Guinean wantok (tribe) – along with gardening and
pigs, the most important aspect of PNG society. He explains how the
wantok give money to each other, provide food, give each other jobs,
and fight for each other, to the death. Thanks to the success of his
scheme Kay has become one of the most respected figures in the area,
recently being chosen by the surrounding villages to run for councillor
in the regional elections. Sitting in his impressively colourful garden
watching his children chasing a neighbours chicken, it is easy to see
why Kay has few complaints. “I am a rich man!” He says laughing, though
I suspect only half jokingly. “Maybe even richer than you.”
Third runners up: Emily Sim
The road to hell is unpaved. It is narrow and dusty and riddled with
potholes large enough to swim in when the rains come. Occasionally
there is a bump of decades-old asphalt jutting out of the dirt, a
fossil from a faraway time. Since that time, a generation of babies has
been born to a soundtrack of gunshots and screams, and these days those
babies are now giving birth to their own babies. Half the population of
Uganda is under the age of fifteen and the proportion is even higher in
the North. Here, rebels waged a gruesome war for over two decades.
There are few who are old enough to remember the paved roads of the
past.
I see my first dead body along the road to Kitgum. Despite living in
Uganda for over six months and attending a handful of the numerous
burials that took place in our village, I have not yet seen death in
the flesh. In Rwanda I had been to the genocide museum and seen
concrete slabs, which lie on top of 200,000 bodies in a mass grave.
Inside the museum are hundreds more bones neatly sorted and lined up
side by side like pieces of Lego ready to be put together again. How
can this be real?
Through the bus window, my eyes see the body, wrapped in a sheet, with
two small feet sticking out the end. Feet the same size as Tefula’s,
the tiny boy who cried when he first saw my white skin but later taught
me to count in Lusoga despite his knowledge of English being limited to
the word ‘bye’. For the next few hours I am numb. My head swims with
small bodies. Thankfully something else eventually takes over. I have
to pee. I stagger down to the front of the rocking metal cage. The
conductor says, ‘OK, OK soon’, and half an hour later I leap off into
the bushes. ‘Ahh...No!’ the conductor pulls my arm back and laughs
again. ‘Not there’, he says shaking his head, and pushing me towards
the road at the back of the bus. ‘Landmines’ he says and mimes an
explosion with his hands. My mind tumbles with the question of which
way I should be going. There are twice as many passengers as seats, not
counting the babies sprinkled around everyone’s laps. A scrawny chicken
pecks my foot, my bags are piled high on my lap, someone’s sweet
potatoes are wedged tightly around me, there’s a baby poking my knee,
and a goat somewhere behind. Conversation ripples through the length of
the bus and I pick up a few strands in English and a few tiny fragments
in Lusoga. The rains have drenched the fields and the crops have
sprouted, bringing forth livelihoods and sustenance. Men’s sweat
lingers with goat breath and rotting jackfruit skins and milky babies
and fresh rain. I breathe it all in deeply, for I don’t want to forget.
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