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Hot Ammonia: The Smell of Public Transit

USA | Thursday, 26 April 2012 | Views [370]

It’s a long rocky ride

From the far north side

To one hundred and third and Oak Park.

 

Where the rumble of rails

And intercom squeals

Make handwriting an illegible chore.

 

Between dust and dead skin

Hot ammonia grasps metal

Its stench hiding remnants of piss.

 

I’m probably better not knowing

What disease keeps rubbing

On my palms when I cling to the rail.

 

When the subway arrives,

It’s no big surprise that

All hands shuffle in pockets for iPods.

 

But a bum screams enough

Into a red thermos cup

That passengers remark, all appalled.

 

With Lady Soverign blaring

Two kids keep on nagging

When we’re all better not knowing why.

 

With no cars or concrete

Passing the window at speed

Daddy next door is having some trouble.

 

“If the tram is a square

Why are those walls curved?”

He remarks like an unsung superhero.

 

The kids sit stumped.

My legs lie crossed, ‘till

Joints graze with a deaf one seat over.

 

Speaking without saying,

Am I better for not knowing

The exciting topic his torso flails for?

 

Rising up from the depths

Gray sky plasters wet

Splashes on tin topped pagoda roofs.

 

As a single girl out

To conquer the heart

Of Chicago, I don’t mind heading downtown.

 

For the thrill of the ride

I’ll document this stride

Until I roll into bed back at home.

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